Top 1: Name: Matti Kyle W
Title: The Boy
This essay is very interesting, it is easy for us to read. The author has strong ability of imagination, he gives us an interesting story and we all like to read it. The boy in the story is very interesting, at first we all think he is stupid, but finally I know he is smart, and he is also very luck. Although the story is not very long, but all the stuff have been written into the eassy. I can't find any mistake about the grammar and vocabulary, and the intelligent plot is really nice. This essay is my favourite eassy form all the articles.
Top 2: Name: Qian Wang
Title: Memory Coffee Shop
This article is really different from others', this article is very special, because the author uses a large amout of dialoge in her essay. From the dialoge of this article, it is easy for us to konw the main character of the boy and that woman. The plot is not only clear, but also interesting. It doesn't take so much time for me to finish reading all the article. The imagination of the author is also excellent, I think I need to learn how to write my own essay in this way. On the other hand, all the stuff have been written in the article, that is why I think this essay is the top 2 article.
Top 3: Name: Schlief Emily A
Title: Dream of event
This plot of this essay is very clear, I am attracted by the whole story, the experience of the lady. From the experience of the lady, it is easy for us to see the deep emotion of the lady in the article. The imagination of this article is also good, it can bring all the audience to the story. We can find all the stuff in the story easily, and I can't find any mistake about the grammar and the vocabulary. The author show enough details about the thought and emotion of the lady, and then it is easy for us to know more details about this eassy.
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